Final Writing Test

 Yesterday, I have done the last writing test. This Class is very difficult because I must a lot of write English. But I could study English and write English. But Tomei teacher said to me bad, I study English more, I show him I can use English.   49/15031

essay:1-05 Toy Stry

I watched the movie which is named Toy Story. This movie has series one and
two and three. This movie was very popular in all over the world. I watched Toy
Story series two. This movie is very interesting and the most impressive in all of
the series. But, I like Toy Story two the most in the series. This movie’s story is
beginning that this story’s important human Andy plays with his toys. These toys
are Woody and Buzz Lightyear and more of Andy’s toys. Andy’s favorite toys are
Woody and Buzz Lightyear. Andy is always playing with them. But, in fact, these
toys are moving freely and are talking with each other. But, when toys can do
these things, there is nobody near the toys.

One day, Andy had an important question. It is that woody’s arm was broken. So,
Andy would not take Woody in cowboy camping. But, woody thought that Andy
has come to dislike Woody. When that time, one of the toy penguins named
Whizzy is taken to be sold by Woody’s mother. Toys go to help their friend
Whizzy. But, their mission is failure. And, Woody was taken to be sold.

Woody is a rare toy, so Woody was sold to a Japanese museum. In that time, Buzz
Lightyear and a lot of toys go to help Woody. Woody is meeting a lot of other
toys, and Woody was known that these toys will be sold to a Japanese museum.
Then, Buzz Lightyear and a lot of toys come to help Woody. After that, Woody
and the toys escape that place. I was surprising to escape scene. Finally, Woody
and a lot of toys arrived their home.

Woody met a girl who name is Jessie. She gets out in the next Toy Story. She is
very cool and kind to other toys. I watched this movie, I think that Woody and a
lot of toys are very cool and kind to their friends. I want to become a human that
is kind to my friends. I want to watch Toy Story four, if it becomes movie.        329/14982

essay:1-06 Free Movie Review

I must write about a movie I choose, so I write about my favorite movie which is
‘Harry Potter’. I like the most the movie that is Harry Potter’s fifth story which is
called ‘Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix’. I have watched this movie 100
times in high school. It is very interesting movie, because it has a lot of battle
scene. The other Harry Potter movies have a battle scene, but there are
especially a lot of battle scenes in this movie.

The Harry Potter series has a lot of character. In that, my favorite character is
Sirius Black. This character appears on Harry Potter’s third movie first. When
Sirius Black appears at first, he was a very bad guy. It was said that he wants to
murder to Harry Potter. But he named to Harry Potter. Because Harry Potter
became to love him like a his father.

Harry Potter entered The Order of the Phoenix. This group was made by Sirius
Black. Because of murdering to Voldemort. This story's main theme is battling
Voldemort using The Order of the Phoenix. When Harry Potter went to this
group's place, everyone disagree that Harry Potter enter this group. But Sirius
Black agreed to it. And, Magic school students entered this group. This group
prepares to battle with Voldemort.

And, Voldemort and The Order of the Phoenix compete to find an important
object underground. At first, Voldemort and the Magic student battled, but Harry
Potter's friends arrest by the army. When Harry Potter finds the important
object, Sirius Black and The Order of the Phoenix was coming to help. I like this
scene the best. Sirius Black says 'Don't touch my son.' It is very cool. And, the
Order of the Phoenix knocks out the army. But a woman kills Sirius Black. A
woman name is Lastrange. Harry Potter is very very angry. Harry Potter will
murder her, but Harry Potter was stopped by Voldemort. And Dumbledore is
coming to help Harry Potter. I like this scene too. And he battled Voldemort.
Finally Voldemort escaped. And, this story is ending.

I heard this story first, I was very sad that Sirius Black died. But, this movie is
very interesting. So, I have watched a lot of times.                  351/14629

BR:1-20 The playhouse

Shari and Amy made a playhouse.

I read this book, I remember my childhood. I made a secret place in the backyard. I played with my sister and couson. I said to my father and my grandmother. I like to playing in secret place because I was very beet my heart. I think that this book's Shari and Amy is same to me. They called their friends. So, I think that it is a lot of fun. I want to play with Shari and Amy in this playhouse. I think I return childhood a little.

Berry, Shilo (2004). The playhouse                                                        104/15004

BR:1-19 The Queen's New Seat

"You will have to sit in your old seat"

I read this book, I think that Queen is not good. I do not like rich and large attitude. Sometimes, large attitude human is appeared to me, I always angry. I think that human has to do kind for another human. If I will be rich, I do not become large attitude human. Because I do not like this book's Queen. I think that Queen has to be kind for everyone.

Brown, Cushla(2004). The Queen's New Seat                                                 88/14900

BR:1-18 When I looked out of my window

"When I looked out of my window"

I read this book, I think that I saw a lot of things in the world. This book's main character is a girl. This girl is seeing out of her window. Her parents and cut and friends and school bus. every day, I always pass normal day, but in the past day I meet a lot of things. I think that I want to do every day importance. Because I will be importance meeting for now.

Pipher, Tom(2004). When I looked out of my window                                  93/14812

BR:1-17 Big Greg the firefighter

He likes to fight fire. (P2)

I read this book, I feel so cool to firefighter. This book's hero is man who names Big Greg. My cheesing sentence means Big Greg likes to put out a fire. I think he likes his working and respect to his working. I feel so cool for this. Future, I will work to respect to my working. Fire Fighter is very dengerous working. But he does not his work is dengerous. So, I think so cool point. I want to become Big Greg.

Ben Smith(2004) Big Greg the firefighter                                             94/14719